Re-drafted Shot List for My Opening Scene

I have redrafted my shot list, changing the order of some of my shots but also adding some specific camera movements.

• Medium shot of a road sign for ‘Seven Devils’ 
• Establishing shot of town (high angle) from the edge of the woods
• Establishing shot of the town (high angle) from the view of a path
• Establishing shot of a quiet road running through some woods
• Extreme long shot of suburban house 
• Cut to inside girl's room - two shot/medium long shot of girls sitting on a couch close together
• The camera pans slowly to show the posters and props (horror iconography) in close up/medium close up 
• The camera is slightly high angled and slowly zooms into the girls 
• While there girls are talking about the characters, the camera cuts to each person individually showing them in medium close up or close up 
• Cut to medium shot of boy packing ouija board into bag 
• Cut to a tracking shot of boy walking past the 'Seven Devils' street sign (medium long shot/medium shot 
• Extreme long shot and low angle of sinister house
• Slow zoom in on ominous person in the window (ends in a medium close up/backlighting)